Wednesday, January 4, 2012

Fight

You've never pushed me around
I've never felt the sting of a slap

 But as fists flew from your mouth
They cut and bruised more
Than any punch thrown could

We stood in shocked silence
Startled in the aftermath


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6 comments:

  1. ellieJanuary 4, 2012 at 1:26 AM

    Love the picture with this one. Such truth and so well put to the test in your words.

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  2. ivy's closetJanuary 4, 2012 at 4:49 PM

    So sudden and real.

    Love your Once upon a Time gif too.

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  3. mazzy mayJanuary 4, 2012 at 4:57 PM

    Such an intense poem. Thanks for posting it.

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  4. lucy and sarahJanuary 4, 2012 at 5:04 PM

    Such a cool poem. Amazing writing. All the best on a new year of blogging and poetry.

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  5. mollyJanuary 4, 2012 at 5:18 PM

    You are definitely on your way to an amazing start of writing this year..with this one. All the best to your new year!

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  6. Ben and MollyJanuary 4, 2012 at 5:28 PM

    What a great start to the year with this one!

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